Tennis/Park
When the spinning ball flashed past
me it travelled over the fence and landed in the surrounding fresh park. So I
went to get it but
OH NO!!!! A dog is chewing it,
that’s disgusting. So I asked the dog’s owner if I could have my ball back. He said
in a low voice, “what ball ?” And I said ,“that ball, the ball that your dog is
chewing on!”So he looked at the bright slobbered ball and said “sure you can
have your bright slobbered ball back.” So the rough dog dropped the slobbered
ball on the lime green grass. Then I picked up the gross ball (that isn’t bright anymore) and wiped the
slobber off it. Then I washed my hands of course. While I was washing my hands
my sister “shouted hurry up Sarah your taking so long.” Then I shouted back, “okay
okay I’m coming jeez.” so I ran so fast to the tennis court to finish me and my
sisters game of tennis, but before that I asked “can I serve sis” then she said
“fine”!
By : Sarah Ta
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